music class

“Get in the car.  i was on my way to music class it was about a hour away so i decided to take a quick nap, The instrument i play is the guitar and it was really hard to get to play the guitar for this music team only 3 people made it for guitars!! and over 50 people tried out and i’m one of the three after practice was over my mom said lets go were leaving and i said ok wait after this song. As i do the first line it was already completely out of tune. I say whatever.

4 thoughts on “music class

  • February 14, 2019 at 1:42 pm

    Really good post, but you should capitalize your “I’s”. That’s cool that only three people made it for guitars.

  • February 15, 2019 at 8:36 am

    Good job but just so you know you put down one quotation mark but never put a second one to end the talking.

  • February 15, 2019 at 11:33 am

    Good job, make your I’s capital

  • February 24, 2019 at 12:37 am

    Hi Landon,
    I wonder if you do indeed play the guitar. If so, congratulations on being of the few selected.
    The other commenters have mentioned your lack of punctuation so I’ll just suggest that before you post, you might like to read your writing aloud so you know what the reader is experiencing.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand


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