“Hey look there’s a violin” I said. “I’m going to try to play it”. “Screeeeeeech,” it was completely out of tune. I set the violin back down. I said to my sister that’s not my thing. Now we were just looking for something to do. We found another violin with a nice black case. When we went to open the box that the violin is I slowly opened the box and a little mouse slowly crawled out, I took 1 step backwards and then I saw about 30 more mice so me and my sister sprinted and got out of the attic.
- music class
- it was completely out of tune
3 thoughts on “It was completely out of tune #20”
I really liked your 100wc and the words you chose. My feedback would be explain more.
I agree, It could use some more explaining but I liked the story. 🙂 🙂 🙂
I really liked the story and I have nothing to suggest