The time I saw a bear!

     One time I was on a hike! Me and Maddie love hiking! We have even been all over the world to go hiking! At least Costa Rica. Anyway we were hiking and we saw a bear. We got big and started talking a lot . To scare the bear away. Maddie got so scared she ran! You never do that when you see a bear. It started chasing us all the way to the car. My mom was picking us up this time. We got in the car. My mom drove us away so fast. We made it, “yeah” we said!

3 thoughts on “The time I saw a bear!

  • March 8, 2022 at 10:17 am
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    I love the detail in the story claire keep up the good work!

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  • March 8, 2022 at 10:30 am
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    Amazing story i love the detail! Keilana

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  • March 18, 2022 at 6:32 am
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    Wow. Your characters were very lucky. What you should do depends on the type of bear but running isn’t one of them. To make it even scarier though what about describing the bear? I imagined a grizzly bear but because I don’t know what kind of bears are in Costa Rica.

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