Lets get up this ladder. I am a construction worker I am building a ginormous building in New York. The ladder i am climbing is red this is a really high ladder that I am climbing if I look down all I see is pavement. I finally made it to the top of the ladder and I am really tired. Now I have to go get some paint and sinkers. I’m so exited to get my coins. I am slowly painting the outside of the construction site the place I am building is going to be the 5 tallest building ever.
Good jod but here is some feedback you needed to capatalise one of your “I”s when it says “ The ladder i am climbing is red”. But otherwise I really liked your story keep up the good work.
-Sophia,CO.usa
Thank you for the feedback