sinking red ladder on the pavement made of coins

One day i went outside onto the pavement  with the quite tweet of the birds coming from  north and the slow breeze coming from the south.As i went for a walk i noticed coins, then walking farther i saw a red ladder, then walking even farther i saw a fish sinking into a lake. This walk has been great so far but i saw some weird thing i think to myself. As i cept running i noticed a sinking red ladder on the pavement made of coins. as i head home i remember  what i saw along the way. WHAT?

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  1. Hi Maddie,
    You have done so well to work that diverse series of words into your writing. I especially like the way you have managed to get them all into one sentence.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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