Today was the day, It was my birthday! I was doing a big party that all my friends were invited! My parents helped me decorate for the party. I was done decorating and I got changed already so I was ready. All the people started coming. We ate , we danced, and played games. It was time to open presents. I opened my friend Marley’s present first. It was big. I saw it and it a was a PIANO!!!!!!!!!!! I stared to play and it was completely out of tune. So I couldn’t play it any more. I was very sad.
Kirsten-Colorado;USA i really like your your title and your idea happy birthday by the way