One day I was just walking with my friend Marley in the woods at night time. (We had flashlights) We heard a noise. “What was that?” Said Marley. It came closer. A man jump out at us. “What are you kids doing here at this time.”Said the man. I flashed the light at his face. “Ahhhhh!”Screamed the man as the light blinded him.
“RUN!” I Screamed as i pulled Marley’s hand and ran. We made it out of the woods. I was so glad to be out of there.We both went home. We had another adventure in front of us.
good job
no, great job!
Nice job using paragraphs, although you didn’t make a new paragraph for the man talking. Also for some reason I can’t read it without highlighting the text but that does not matter what matters is the amazing story!
good job Destiny! very creepy!
Good job! i loved how used amazing description!
Your story was creepy i would like a part 2 to that story
It was very good. I liked the details and the talking. GOOD JOB
you did a great job with the story. If I was in that situation I would honestly do the same thing.