One day I was just walking with my friend Marley in the woods at night time. (We had flashlights) We heard a noise. “What was that?” Said Marley. It came closer. A man jump out at us. “What are you kids doing here at this time.”Said the man. I flashed the light at his face. “Ahhhhh!”Screamed the man as the light blinded him.
“RUN!” I Screamed as i pulled Marley’s hand and ran. We made it out of the woods. I was so glad to be out of there.We both went home. We had another adventure in front of us.
8 thoughts on “100wc Week#15 The Man”
no, great job!
Nice job using paragraphs, although you didn’t make a new paragraph for the man talking. Also for some reason I can’t read it without highlighting the text but that does not matter what matters is the amazing story!
good job Destiny! very creepy!
Good job! i loved how used amazing description!
Your story was creepy i would like a part 2 to that story
It was very good. I liked the details and the talking. GOOD JOB
you did a great job with the story. If I was in that situation I would honestly do the same thing.