There Goes The Gorilla

BOOM! The gorilla broke through the brick wall of the zoo. The cops came running catch the gorilla as it went into the woods. As the cops stepped foot into the woods they saw the yellow colored collar the gorilla was wearing. But they still had to find the gorilla. They looked every where but the city. They saw the gorilla  running in the city. It was going crazy like throwing bricks. Finally the cops toke aim and tranquilized the gorilla. A big truck came to pick it up and they were off back to the zoo. They did it!

2 thoughts on “There Goes The Gorilla

  • November 19, 2018 at 3:45 am

    Hello Cayden, there is a lot of action in your story. I wasn’t sure why you had the gorilla wearing a yellow collared collar? I would have liked to have the answer to that; maybe you can write a longer story at some stage and you can show the link. I like how you sound exhausted at the end of the story. This emphasises how much action has been taking place.

  • November 19, 2018 at 10:40 am

    I liked it Cayden, it was so intense!


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