the attack of the angry gorilla/100wc

One bright and sunny day, I was walking down the street with my parents. Than all of a sudden an angry gorilla was running down the street toward the brick wall into the park. it was running towards a pretty women in a yellow shirt and some jean shorts and black boots. I was running after the gorilla and tried to jump on it. than the police came and tried to catch the gorilla by shooting it but they kept missing because it was to fast. But at some point they decided the would use a net to catch it.

2 thoughts on “the attack of the angry gorilla/100wc

  • November 20, 2018 at 10:42 am

    Hi Alyssa, this is a lovely and well structured 100WC story. I like the way it flows and the fact that no-one is injured at all. Wild rampaging Gorilla’s can be dangerous! A good creative use of a difficult prompt well done.

  • December 6, 2018 at 10:54 am

    Nice story! I really liked how you made it so the police failed to catch it because it was too fast!


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