One day I was walking my dog Maggie then we came to a field and we saw three statues Maggie walked up to one and and peed on it “Maggie what is wrong with you? silly dog” I said while laughing “come on lets go to the dog park” when we got there I saw my friend Eve and her dog Jake which happen’s to be Maggie’s boy friend and right when Maggie saw Jake she ran and I mean fast she toke me half way across the dog park “Maggie you really are a super super really silly dog”
I liked how you said that Jake was your dogs boyfriend, but you can work on those capitals.
good job