“Baaaaaaaaaaaaa”. It was a really loud goat from lil nuggets farm. I was walking down wild berry road across town “Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” .It seemed to be getting louder but I was very very far from lil nuggets farm. I was always wanting to go on an adventure so I sprinted into the woods I went as fast as I could until I got tired then I stopped. I was so deep in the woods I think I’m lost “baaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”. It sounded like they were right next to me but now i also heard a cow. I walked threw the brush “BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA”
- The Three Animal Heads
- 100 wc 3 heads
I like your story a lot.
Great introduction Brennan! We will never know if the BAAA sound was for good or for evil. There are a few punctuation errors at the end of sentences. For next time, remember to listen to your work to possibly catch them.
I really like the suspense of this story. I can imagine this being read out around a campfire! Keep writing!
Mrs A ( Team 100WC)
good job
good gob