Goat Heads week 4

“Baaaaaaaaaaaaa”. It was a really loud goat from lil nuggets farm.  I was walking down wild berry road across town “Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” .It seemed  to be getting louder but I was very very far from lil nuggets farm. I was always wanting to go on an adventure so I sprinted into the woods  I went as fast as I could until I got tired then I stopped. I was so deep in the woods I think I’m lost “baaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”. It sounded like they were right next to me but now i also heard a cow. I walked threw the brush “BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA”

4 thoughts on “Goat Heads week 4

  • October 4, 2018 at 10:59 am

    I like your story a lot.

  • October 8, 2018 at 2:16 pm

    Great introduction Brennan! We will never know if the BAAA sound was for good or for evil. There are a few punctuation errors at the end of sentences. For next time, remember to listen to your work to possibly catch them.
    I really like the suspense of this story. I can imagine this being read out around a campfire! Keep writing!

    Mrs A ( Team 100WC)


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