I kept on running down the sidewalk. The alligator kept following! All of the sudden, it stomped on the ground. BOOM! Three poles with animal heads surrounded me. I tried to escape, but they kept moving in front of me! The alligator jumped in with me and went after me. All of a sudden the poles moved closer and closer! The alligator jumped at me. I slid to the side and the alligator ran into the pole really hard. Then all of the poles disappeared. When the alligator turned around it had huge red dot on its mauve face. “SHOOT!”
Nice job! I like how you included that it was mauve from week 2. I also really liked how you made the poles move, and that you – BONK!! Oh wait I’m the alligator, I forgot, and I just got hit by the poles! Also, what’s the red dot supposed to mean?
thx. I worked really hard.=)