100 word challenge week 3 the clock

I woke up one morning and I  looked at the clock. It was August fourteenth  and it was 10:00 a.m. I rushed downstairs and realized, today is my birthday party!!!!!!!!! My friends will be here any minute! I looked at the clock but It seemed to be going backwards… I stepped in for a closer look, but I seemed to be going backwards too! I screamed, in horror as my cat ran in backwards circles around me. Hey, I thought I’ll just step backwards any time I want to walk so I did just that until my friends arrived to play.

7 thoughts on “100 word challenge week 3 the clock

  • September 28, 2018 at 10:49 am
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    Clever solution! Your cat was a great detail, too – well done!

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  • September 28, 2018 at 10:52 am
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    love it so creative

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  • September 28, 2018 at 11:00 am
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    Good job! At first I thought you didn’t use the sentence, but you did… Clever trickery… I liked how you had everything going backwards! Although I don’t exactly get the ending…

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  • September 30, 2018 at 9:33 am
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    I’d love to have everything backwards on my birthday…I’d get to eat the cake first!

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  • September 30, 2018 at 2:10 pm
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    I like the idea of stepping towards a clock to make time go backwards, think of all of those times when it would be advantageous to be able to do that!
    Miss T Team 100wc

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  • September 30, 2018 at 4:50 pm
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    Great story!

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  • October 1, 2018 at 3:31 pm
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    Hi Joelle,
    This is an interesting story that creates a clear picture of everything being not quite as it seems. I agree with your teacher that the cat was a good detail to add a little extra to the story. Thank you for sharing your writing on the 100 word challenge.

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