I woke up one morning and I looked at the clock. It was August fourteenth and it was 10:00 a.m. I rushed downstairs and realized, today is my birthday party!!!!!!!!! My friends will be here any minute! I looked at the clock but It seemed to be going backwards… I stepped in for a closer look, but I seemed to be going backwards too! I screamed, in horror as my cat ran in backwards circles around me. Hey, I thought I’ll just step backwards any time I want to walk so I did just that until my friends arrived to play.
- Cube week #3
7 thoughts on “100 word challenge week 3 the clock”
Clever solution! Your cat was a great detail, too – well done!
love it so creative
Good job! At first I thought you didn’t use the sentence, but you did… Clever trickery… I liked how you had everything going backwards! Although I don’t exactly get the ending…
I’d love to have everything backwards on my birthday…I’d get to eat the cake first!
I like the idea of stepping towards a clock to make time go backwards, think of all of those times when it would be advantageous to be able to do that!
Miss T Team 100wc
This is an interesting story that creates a clear picture of everything being not quite as it seems. I agree with your teacher that the cat was a good detail to add a little extra to the story. Thank you for sharing your writing on the 100 word challenge.