Them Dang Alligators

After school, I said bye to my teacher. Once I got home I was going to the lake till I saw a alligator. Later me and my sister went outside to climb a big tree. It was tricky to get down, but we got down. Anyway once we got down me and my sister ran in a long field of mauve flowers, and the mauve felt good on our knees and ankles. When we got home we told mom that we were going swimming. We went swimming and the water felt relaxing till we saw the alligator again. “Run away!”

9 thoughts on “Them Dang Alligators

  • September 21, 2018 at 3:13 pm
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    Nice story, although TECHNACLY you didn’t use climbed, you use climb. Well, it’s fine.

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    • September 21, 2018 at 3:22 pm
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      I also loved it to. But I agree.

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      • September 21, 2018 at 3:38 pm
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        thank you

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        • September 21, 2018 at 3:44 pm
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          thank you to!;}

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  • September 21, 2018 at 3:18 pm
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    Good job! You’re a good writer and very descriptive!

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      • September 21, 2018 at 3:24 pm
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        I agree so much!!!

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      • September 28, 2018 at 10:41 am
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        I think he was talking about Cayden…

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  • September 23, 2018 at 3:55 pm
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    Good job! Although you made a few mistakes with your grammar. For example “till” is not a real word.

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