After school, I said bye to my teacher. Once I got home I was going to the lake till I saw a alligator. Later me and my sister went outside to climb a big tree. It was tricky to get down, but we got down. Anyway once we got down me and my sister ran in a long field of mauve flowers, and the mauve felt good on our knees and ankles. When we got home we told mom that we were going swimming. We went swimming and the water felt relaxing till we saw the alligator again. “Run away!”
- 100WC Josie week 2
9 thoughts on “Them Dang Alligators”
Nice story, although TECHNACLY you didn’t use climbed, you use climb. Well, it’s fine.
I also loved it to. But I agree.
thank you to!;}
Good job! You’re a good writer and very descriptive!
I agree so much!!!
I think he was talking about Cayden…
Good job! Although you made a few mistakes with your grammar. For example “till” is not a real word.