Week 24 – the teacup

I wanted to have a picnic so, I  packed the food. When I was done packing I stared walking to find a quiet grassy area. Then I found a spot near a park that was quiet. I saw my friend walking by the park.  I asked her if she wanted to come to the picnic. “Hi Sophia.” I said.

“Hi” said Sophia walking over.”

When she got there she started talking about this giant teacup that her grandma drew on a note and how she wanted to find it.  So, they started their big quest to find the giant teacup.

7 thoughts on “Week 24 – the teacup

  • March 19, 2018 at 1:42 pm
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    I think it was cool how you had Sophia in it! (:

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  • March 19, 2018 at 1:43 pm
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    i like the quest to find the tea cup at the end it was a perfect touch to the story

    ~tori and emily

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  • March 19, 2018 at 1:45 pm
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    I like how you added Sophia and some dialogue into your story

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  • March 19, 2018 at 1:45 pm
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    good job Lusha:] love your story (]thanks for having me in your story) from:Reilly and Sasha

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  • March 19, 2018 at 1:46 pm
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    Good cliff hanger gab and michael

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  • March 19, 2018 at 1:46 pm
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    I like your story. 😀

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