I wanted to have a picnic so, I packed the food. When I was done packing I stared walking to find a quiet grassy area. Then I found a spot near a park that was quiet. I saw my friend walking by the park. I asked her if she wanted to come to the picnic. “Hi Sophia.” I said.
“Hi” said Sophia walking over.”
When she got there she started talking about this giant teacup that her grandma drew on a note and how she wanted to find it. So, they started their big quest to find the giant teacup.
I think it was cool how you had Sophia in it! (:
i like the quest to find the tea cup at the end it was a perfect touch to the story
~tori and emily
I like how you added Sophia and some dialogue into your story
good job Lusha:] love your story (]thanks for having me in your story) from:Reilly and Sasha
Good cliff hanger gab and michael
I like your story. 😀
and dalton