I was just walking downtown, having a good day. Then I started to come back home. As I came home I saw a giant Tea Cup.”This wasn’t here before?” I was curious wondering how it got here and why it was here? The whole rest of the day I went to go look at it. This thing looked as i it was old, “This is a mystery!” I studied it and at 12:00 am a UFO picked it up.”Oh WOW!!”and I waved to them and they waved back. “WAIT!?” I woke up and it was only a dream, Was I glad!
very creative! 😊
Hi Chase,
I used to teach year 3 and 4 students who often finished their stories with ‘it was just a dream.’ I think that the quality of your writing is worthy of a more creative ending. What about the gleaming space ship landing, the door opening and ???? I wonder what you might see inside.
What do you think?
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Plymouth
New Zealand
good job?:]