Today I saw an alligator in our classroom. My teacher said, ¨Tricky alligator!” while climbing the mauve ladder. When we got on the ladder we saw a swamp. My teacher said, ¨This was not here before.¨ We decided to play I Spy and I said, ¨I spy with my little eye something green.¨ Everything was green and it was the alligator. They couldn´t spot the alligator in the green swamp. When we got back into the classroom, the alligator was gone. My classmates said, ¨What was the green thing?¨
I said, ¨The alligator.¨ When we went outside he was gone.
I really like this! But you didn’t have much detail, and your transitions were pretty much all and.