One day I was with my friends on a bike ride and then out of no were it stared a huge down poor of rain! Emma said “peddle as fast as you can!” Claire said ‘just run and don’t slip!” Blake said “go uh mm……..”
Then the building shook and then Blake said “Lexi’s house!” I said “yes come to my house follow me!” So we road are bikes to my house. We got to my house and dried off then we played cards and talked about the crazy but fun time we had on are bike ride that day!
I really liked your story because it talked about you and your friends having a fun time together outside and riding you bikes together.
LEXI! I love your story. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!
Nice job Lexi! I enjoyed the story! One thing I think you could add is that it was a little hard to read the orange. But the color is the best color ever. I would have picked it! Over all your story is so so so so so so so so good! From Claire!