“Can we go yet? Can we? Claire yelled down the stairs. “Can you calm down?” I said sarcastically. We were traveling from Oxford, MI to Orlando, Florida. “Emma, Claire we need to go.” said mom. It was a hour drive. We got to the airport. “Can I cheek your passport? ” he asked. “Sure.” We all gave him our passports, then went to security. ” Let’s get some food before we leave” said mom. We got candy and water for the plane. “Time to go.” said dad. Off we went. We got to the resort. Claire and me jumped into the pool.
- The horrible flight
- The trip to Nowhere
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Great hook at the beginning. I also think you did a great job with your quotes.
From Carson’s Mom