I was on a farm minding my own business, then after i see a singing donkey singing! and it was out of tune because it was not just a singing donkey, it was a mean singing donkey. I was tying to sneak up on him, but he had found me! I tried to run from him but he was to for me to run away from him. I was trying to run as fast as i can but he was on my tail. Finally i lost him and i am finally free and i can go back home and sleep.
I don’t think I would ever have thought about a donkey being in this prompt. That is very creative!
I loved it
It was a great story and very funny,. I hope that donkey steps on a Lego. 🙂
I really like your paragraph, but you could work on grammar and capitalization.