One day I was at a party with my parents there was a boy who was playing the flute. It was completely out of tune so everybody went next door to the teenager with the guitar. Everybody danced to the great guitar teenager but I still herd the flute very faintly. Then the guitar teenager finish his song. so everybody went to the next room there was a man with a trombone. He was very grate at playing the trombone and I still herd the guitar and the flute and when the man finished the song. Everybody went back home.
- Completely out of tune
- The Flute
3 thoughts on “Music Party”
I like the way you write. By the way check spelling and remember to put the story in past tense.
There was one past-tense mistake but the adjectives and amazing story took it to another level!
I well try harder on my spelling thank you for comenting.