One morning, me and my family went church because it was it was Christmas eve morning. We got there and I got a cinnamon bagel, we went into the auditorium and we sat down it said 15 minutes and 37 seconds left till the show starts. The show started off with a woman singing she had a great voice but it was completely out of tune. The next part of the show was dancing I loved because one guy was singing rap in the back round I thought he was very talented. The last part of the show was a singing contest.
My thing was kinda simalar.
Good job Josh great story I just saw some spots where a period or comma should have been but otherwise good job
I think your thaught was pretty good, but what song was she singing and how was it out of tune? Otherwise i think your story is amazing and i like how you said that she was singing good but IT WAS COMPLETLY OUT OF TUNE