baby 100WC allie

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7 thoughts on “baby 100WC allie

  • December 5, 2018 at 11:03 am
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    work on your spelling and work on your transitions also I thought you did good

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  • December 5, 2018 at 11:07 am
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    you did a really good job. 😉
    But you might want to work on were you put your peiroids.

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    • January 11, 2019 at 10:27 am
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      great job thought you did amazing you did not miss anything GG

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:24 am
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    Good job like the story maybe work on your spelling and transition but other than that i liked the story

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:35 am
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    I thought it was good.

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:38 am
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    good job, but you had a little mistake on your spelling

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:40 am
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    I would work on your spelling and punctuation if I were you but overall I thought it was good

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