The mini figure looked small, it had a black and yellow suit, and it was holding a camera. I started moving it, slowly, taking a picture every time. I watched what I had so far, but it wasn’t smooth enough! “Hmm, how can I make this smoother?” I asked. Then, a bunch of lady bugs came and attacked the mini figure! “Oh no!” I yelled. They just kept coming! Then, the mini figure started moving, and he fought them off. “Woah, I’ve gotta get this!” I yelled I quickly grabbed my phone and started recording. Then, it killed them all!
I enjoyed the story. the lead was very good.
Thanks! I tried to use a descriptive lead, and I think I did pretty good.