The Whole Day Went Backwards

One day i woke up to a lovely day,everything was great, but one thing, i looked at the clock, but it seemed to be going backward

” Huh! Probobly just something with the electrical! ” That  morning i had a great breakfast and headed outside. It looked nice out until I stepped outside, it started storming! A thunder storm in fact! It was weird! When i stepped inside my dad my dad yelled,

Dinner time! “

” What you know that clock ios wrong! ” I explained

” Or maybe your just wrong! Now get in here and eat! “

” Ok, ok, but i just ate breakfast! “

2 thoughts on “The Whole Day Went Backwards

  • September 28, 2018 at 11:57 am
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    Sounds like a wierd world! I like how you included dialogue and indented with each new speaker.

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  • October 3, 2018 at 2:17 pm
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    Nice indenting I like the story

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