One day i woke up to a lovely day,everything was great, but one thing, i looked at the clock, but it seemed to be going backward
” Huh! Probobly just something with the electrical! ” That morning i had a great breakfast and headed outside. It looked nice out until I stepped outside, it started storming! A thunder storm in fact! It was weird! When i stepped inside my dad my dad yelled,
” Dinner time! “
” What you know that clock ios wrong! ” I explained
” Or maybe your just wrong! Now get in here and eat! “
” Ok, ok, but i just ate breakfast! “
Sounds like a wierd world! I like how you included dialogue and indented with each new speaker.
Nice indenting I like the story