I was on my way to the store and when i turned around the corner of the block . It was shinning i had no clue what it was. I was wondering why there was so much traffic .I still didn’t know what it was. It looked like two gigantic hands holding something that i had no idea what it was.It looked like a stick or something .I thought it was a cinnamon stick i stared for about five minutes still traffic everywhere i was so confused. After the five minutes of awkward silence and awkward staring i just walked away.
I like your punctuatin, but you should check your spelling.
good job