One day took a walk in the park and saw a huge tea cup.  Also a tiny little hole right in the middle of it.  The hole had a little rabbit  right in the middle of it.  The little rabbit whispered to me “Follow me and i will show you were you can succeed”.  I jumped into the hole and fell into a land made of cotton candy.  The land was amazing it had houses and logs made from stone candy.  The bunny jumped in-front of me and said “No thins was not meant to happen go back to earth.

2 thoughts on “Week 24 – THE MISTAKE

  • March 19, 2018 at 1:50 pm

    You have a very candy coated imagination.

  • March 21, 2018 at 5:35 pm

    Well done on your entry this week Sam. You have written an imaginative piece. Just be careful to check your spellings before you publish.
    The candy land sounds delicious and you have described it well.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin Ireland


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