This day started off fantastic. There was a note on everybody’s desk. It said “What if you were in charge?” Then I said to myself “That would be sweet!”
The note was from my teacher Mrs. Hay.
The whole entire day I was thinking, “What if I was in charge?”
That night I was thinking the hardest. If I was in charge I would probably stop Global Warming, and in the NFL if someone kneed during the National Anthem, They wouldn’t play again.
That’s what I would do if I was in charge.I would try to make this world better.
You did good with the punctuation. I like how you used world problems that you want to stop. A+