The sun beat down on his neck. Max looked out onto the open sand with nothing and definitely no sign of plane gas. The last thing he can remember before getting on the plane is the man. “Can I check your passport?” he asked. They had to land in the desert to find gas so Max said he would go out and search for gas. Max was glad they all landed safely before they ran out of gas. He was driving with a few other people. Then someone screamed “I FOUND GAS!” Was that really gas he was looking at?
Great start to this! You could use this as a start to a longer story.
From Carson’s Mom
I like haw you expland that the sun was on his fase that was cool jack.
BEN M.
This is a good story!