One day I was sucked into Fortnite Battle royale , there was so much talk about the cube. Its moving all over the map , but now its getting close to loot lake , my favorite spot on the map . I couldn’t let it get close . It was time to investigate . The cube looked like it was coming right at me as soon as I got there, but it seemed to be going backwards . But then it did head right for me , then it stopped at the edge of loot lake , then it fell and melted into loot lake. Fortnite had changed forever.
Nice use of commas! I really like your ending 🙂