Mrs. Hay's Fantasticlass

i woke up one morning and saw my pool but it was yellow and looked smaller. So I ran down the stairs and said “hey mom I am going to go outside”. When i went outside i got my roller skates and tried to jump over the yellow small pool. after i jumped and was in the air i lost balance hit the other side of the pool . Then i fell in i swam so fast i got out of the pool next thing i now I am in the hospital my was there and she said “What happened” Nothing.

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Then I fell in! I swam so fast. I got out of the pool. Next thing I know I am in the hospital. My (mom?) was there and she said, “What happened?”

“Nothing.” I replied.

When we went to the Oxford Museum we learned lots of new things but my favorite thing was learning about the old bank. The bank had two different volts one volt was for papers and vaulbuls. The other volt was for monye. The volt walls were 18 inches thick there was a amare so lould that you could here a mile away. There was a pieano that you had to hold down a peld to make it play. Also in the olden days in the winter they had to go to the bathroom in a pot and in the morning someone had to take the pot and dump it out in the sreet. 

the oxford museum  had a washing table that you had to stand and crank the handle every time you wanted to do the laundry. there  also was a  radio that you had to  get it started by cranking the handle and if you wanted to change the radio you told someone and they would go and change it. we fond out that in the state of oxford it was made of gravel.another cool thing was that barbers were dentist so if you to get your teeth cheeked the barber would have to do it. at dinner they would have a little glass square and they would put in salt and if you wanted salt you would have to pinch the salt and sprinkle little bits of salt. they also had a piano that you had to pump the air with your foot on a little  air pump to play the piano. they also had a record player so if your wanted to  play music your would have to crank the handle. And If you wanted to change the song you walked up and took the cd out and put in a new song.

Wow you got one of the best teachers ever for 4th grade! Mrs. Hay dose so many fun things you are so lucky to have her.  Mrs. Hay also sometimes brings her dog Figgie. You are going to lover Mrs. Hay some other things that she dose is she loves doing crafts so she will be doing a lot of crafts with you all. Mrs. hay makes every thing fun. She also plays a game where you can win a party. Mrs. Hay also dose something called lightning rod test. In the amount of two minutes you have to complete 45 questions of multiplication. You can pass tests if you pass 0-12 you get to start at a lower time you get a lighting bolt and once you do all the times, you now have to do division. I hope you will love Mrs. Hay as much as  did. Keilana.Sheldon