The Bad Day!

  One day, me and my friend Claire were sitting in my room because it was very stormy out. It was very windy and rainy day. My mom was at work. All of of a sudden, I look out the window at the market next door and I told Claire to come here. The building shock and then me and Claire screamed. Me and Claire hearts where beating so fast. I saw tears coming out of Claire eyes so I gave her a big hug and said it will be ok. Claire said “thanks”. That was a very very bad day.

2 thoughts on “The Bad Day!

  • April 7, 2022 at 1:30 pm

    This is a good story!

  • April 11, 2022 at 6:30 am

    Hello Blake,
    You made good use of the prompt in your story of an event on a stormy day. It was lucky you and Claire were together on such a very bad day. well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia


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