One early morning I was skipping in the airport, drinking a hot chocolate. My plane ride was in 23 minutes I was going to Australia. I finally got to gate 34b the air was so cold. I was turning to a icicle. They said that the plane is taking a little bit long so it was going to be not on time. A guy with brown hair and blue eyes came up and said “Can I check your passport”? he asked. “Sure” I said. “There you go, he said” “Ok thanks”. There the plane is I was so so excited. Goodbye!
Good job adding the details like the guy had brown hair and blue eyes. It helped me form a picture in my mind.
From Carson’s Mom
Loved all the little details, 23 minutes, gate 34B! Made it very realistic. Wouldn’t it be fun to go to Australia!!!
Hi Blake! your story/100 word challenge was amazing looking foreword to your nexst post a
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