The hike by Emma T

Dad, what are we doing today?” I asked.

“Um l am not sure,” said dad. Claire was running down the stairs.

“What are we doing?” Said Claire.

” l said that already ” I said.

“l have an idea, ” said mom. “Let’s go on a hike. We love going hiking once a week its fun.”

We left the house and went to the hiking spot. We hiked for a while. ” Dad I see sand up there.” Me and Claire ran to the  sand dunes. We grabbed sticks and walked down the sand and gravel path. ” Be careful,” said mom.

“Sure!” We yelled!

One thought on “The hike by Emma T

  • February 20, 2022 at 6:23 am

    Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Emma. I can see the effort you have put into correctly, punctuating speech. Try starting a sentence with a verb eg Running down the stairs Claire said, “ …. It will add interest to your text. I enjoyed reading your writing.🙏😊


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