My Annoying (but sometimes sweet) Little Brother

                                                             ” Stop it!” I yelled. I was so cross that I wanted to make my brother disappear. He wouldn’t listen. He kept kicking his soccer ball against the wall  ” ROLL, ROLL, THUMP! ROLL, ROLL, THUMP!” I couldn’t take it, and neither could my friend we stood up walked over to him and while I tackled him my friend took away his ball. ” VICTORY!” I yelled but not for long. my brother ran away and got my mom. “oh my,” I thought. “Joelle get up here my” mom hollered “this isn’t going to go over to well with her” I thought.


One thought on “My Annoying (but sometimes sweet) Little Brother

  • March 28, 2019 at 10:45 am

    I love the story but found some capitalization mistakes but overall VERY GOOD JOB!


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