The Building Broke Down – 100wc Week 23

The building is sinking! The firefighter climbed up the red ladder to try and rescue all the people in the top of the office building. Some of the other firefighters called “the building is collapsing!” Everyone screamed and fell but the magical coin saved them from falling. The magic coin made it so it didn’t hurt when everyone fell on the pavement. Everyone was excited that no one got hurt, but they were also sad because many people loved that building. Everyone went home and told all there family members and then everyone watched the news of how it happened.

2 thoughts on “The Building Broke Down – 100wc Week 23

  • March 8, 2019 at 5:43 am
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    Hi Landon, I really enjoyed reading your story! I like the way you describe the scene, it is so vivid that I feel I also want to scream and shout seeing the building collapsing. Do keep writing and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories! 🙂

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  • March 8, 2019 at 10:19 am
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    I love your storey line and imaginatio you are really talented.

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