The Record Player

One day I decided that I wanted to see what was in the attic.  I slowly climbed up the ladder, nervous about what I would find.  When I climbed up, I saw a sheet covering something big.  I went and took the sheet off and saw a strange box that looked like it had a tuba coming out of it.  I saw a button and pressed it.  Good music started playing, but sounded out of tune. I asked my sister to come up with me, and we started dressing in old clothes and dancing.   We had a lot of fun!

3 thoughts on “The Record Player

  • February 12, 2019 at 11:53 am
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    From 100WC Hub in IRELAND. I really enjoyed your story. I loved the way you described how you ‘…climbed the ladder, nervous of what you would find…’ it made me feel nervous for you. I thought it was clever to describe the gramophone (am I right?) rather than tell the reader what the strange box was, well done!

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    • February 15, 2019 at 10:52 am
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      Thank you, but the reason I described it that way is because I don’t know what it’s called!

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  • February 14, 2019 at 1:39 pm
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    You did Riley good i did not find any mistakes it was Reilly filled with information!

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