One day I decided that I wanted to see what was in the attic. I slowly climbed up the ladder, nervous about what I would find. When I climbed up, I saw a sheet covering something big. I went and took the sheet off and saw a strange box that looked like it had a tuba coming out of it. I saw a button and pressed it. Good music started playing, but sounded out of tune. I asked my sister to come up with me, and we started dressing in old clothes and dancing. We had a lot of fun!
- Week 20 100WC: it was completely out of tune….
- broken banjo/100wc/week20
3 thoughts on “The Record Player”
From 100WC Hub in IRELAND. I really enjoyed your story. I loved the way you described how you ‘…climbed the ladder, nervous of what you would find…’ it made me feel nervous for you. I thought it was clever to describe the gramophone (am I right?) rather than tell the reader what the strange box was, well done!
Thank you, but the reason I described it that way is because I don’t know what it’s called!
You did Riley good i did not find any mistakes it was Reilly filled with information!