I was walking when I saw an old broken banjo on the side of the street. I grabbed it and plucked one of the strings and it made a horrible noise. “KREEEK!” I don’t even know how a banjo can make that noise. Then I remembered how a long time ago I threw a broken banjo away. It was completely out of tune. I just wonder how I found it here.I wonder, maybe it was destiny for us to meet again. I ran happily home for no reason and kept plucking the broken banjo’s strings. Destiny made a great choice.
- The Record Player
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I like the words and adjectives you used in your 100wc. Overall I loved the story destiny did give you the banjo. My feedback to you would explain more about how you threw it away.
Isaac-Colorado USA
Great job! I love how you made your story so creative. Your a really goood wrighter and I didn’t catch very many mistakes. You did really good!