It was completely out of tune #20

“Hey look there’s a violin” I said. “I’m going to try to play it”. “Screeeeeeech,” it was completely out of tune. I set the violin back down. I said to my sister that’s not my thing. Now we were just looking for something to do. We found another violin with a nice black case. When we went to open the box that the violin is I slowly opened the box and a little mouse slowly crawled out, I took 1 step backwards and then I saw about 30 more mice so me and my sister sprinted and got out of the attic.

3 thoughts on “It was completely out of tune #20

  • February 14, 2019 at 1:42 pm
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    I really liked your 100wc and the words you chose. My feedback would be explain more.

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    • February 15, 2019 at 10:46 am
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      I agree, It could use some more explaining but I liked the story. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  • February 15, 2019 at 8:41 am
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    I really liked the story and I have nothing to suggest

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