one day me and Maggie were walking to the park when my friend Sophie came over. She Invited me and Maggie to a party that was in 3 hours. When we got to the party the first thing we herd was the music. It was completely out of tune and Maggie I know could fix that so I help Maggie in the DJ booth and instantly the music was fixed. Sophie came over to thank me she said she had no idea how to work a DJ booth. And so the party was great from that point on. Thanks to Maggie.
Josie,
That’s really creative! Great job! One thing you could work on is your capitalization. Other than that, it was really good!
Sincerely,
Evie
Thank you for the suggestion I will work on it.
I really like how you create the setting to be a party! That was very creative!