One steaming hot day, I was walking down the street with my two friends. My friends names are Jake and Fred. The sun was blinding him! Jake laughed at Fred. We saw a huge mall and Jake and Fred wanted to go shop, I disagreed. Well I just had to go with them because, I would be waiting for about 2 hours. They were finally done so I could go play NHL 19. My friends were smart enough to leave the room. I played it till I went to bed. I still think that Fred is running into walls, OUUUUUUUUUUUCH!!! HAHA!!!!
really funny story!;)
I like the story, however you used the sun instead of the light.
good job x
Good Job X I think you should work on more caps though