Torch /Week 15

Hello. My name is Ether, and I am a sorcerer of Torch. If you are reading this, tell nobody about what you are going to see. This is the story about the city Torch. A very rather pleasant place that is filled with very many mysterious things! Once you go there, you can not forget about what you saw. It all started with a young boy named Adam. He was very clever but didn’t know much about the city. Once he entered, the light blinded him. The light was a guardian of Torch. It did that because it sensed evil.

7 thoughts on “Torch /Week 15

  • January 11, 2019 at 10:20 am
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    great job, good punctuation

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:21 am
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    Like the beginning, very good hook but, I wish I could read more.

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    • January 11, 2019 at 10:38 am
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      I am making a Torch 2

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:24 am
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    I like how your talking to the audience overall great story nice job.

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:29 am
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    I think it is vary funny.

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:31 am
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    Liked the story very much

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  • January 11, 2019 at 10:36 am
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    loved the story thought it was really good

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