one day me and Maggie my dog wanted to go to the zoo, so we got in the car and went to the zoo. First we had to check in we went to this building made of bricks. After we checked in we went to see the gorilla after that we went to 47 more then we relisted mom said to met her at the gifted shop so we went running to the gifted shop when we got there my mom was waiting we went in the gifted shop I got Maggie a yellow collier she looked so pretty in it.
Josie, i really like you story i just think you have to work a little bit more on your capitalization.