There was this old lady walking down streets. She saw this wall made out of bricks. She heard this noise behind it she said it sounded like a gorilla. BOOM the gorilla smashed the bricks and started chasing the old lady. The old lady started running. She couldn’t run that well because she had this long pretty yellow dress. The old lady tried to find a spot to hid from a the gorilla. But the gorilla kept finding her and she had to keep running. She ran back home and the gorilla was gone. The old lady was so happy.
I liked it, it was very intense! you are a great writer but sometimes what you say in your story is hard for me to understand. but i loved the story.